Love the story, just the right amount of angst, and humor. There can never be too much Cy/Rae.

This was really good! I love Cy/Rae!

Loved it. Especially the part where raven was thinking that the situation was a little cliche. Because I for one will admit that I used to say that I will never act like a love stricken school girl when I fell in love and of course a couple months later I fell in love and began acting like that. I even remember thinking "Gosh I'm so cliche." Wonderful story. Great job.

WOAH! This just blew me away. I had to stand up, sit down, and everything. You have improved by 10,000%. Bravo! A definite 10/10. Couldn't find one mistake. Be proud!(: Write more!