I wish you would continue this story. It is well written.

This is a pleasure. It's like finding a back window to look at a room that I know well, and now see from a whole different angle. I love how well you are describing his conflicting feelings. I am really looking forward to your version of the proposal should you ever choose to continue this story!

Great story thus far! Hope you continue it!

What is going on? Please update! You have written such a good take on my favorite book ..sincerely Maria

Loving, loving, loving your story. You write a nicely complete view of Thornton's character. Very, very well done. Keep 'em coming!

Just discovered your story today and I love the idea of Mr. Thornton's perspective. Can't wait for an update, Thank you!

Poor John, his troubles are really just starting - he'll not be able to get Margaret out of his mind. The thought of him having a better chance of winning her if he would still be a draper's worker is probably true - sad, but true! Oh well, eventually things will turn out well, right? :)

oooooo...awesome! Keep it up! I like your way of writing, you give just enough details but not too many since most of us know the story. You keep it fresh and new. Thanks! Happy New Year!

Great story! Love your point of view, I hope to see more of Mr. Thornton's thoughts.

LOVED IT! I cant wait for more, awesome job detailing John so well!

Great Chapter!

Love your new chapters. Please write more and soon. You have got Mr. Thornton's pulse just has been one of my favorite characters for ever. Can't help but feel sorry for him. I can't wait for more chapters.

Hi again, I'm so glad to see you posted a new chapter! I enjoyed the glimpse into a bit of the in-between period here. I can't wait for more.

please write more - now ! Maria

More more more! Keep it up! I love it, John Thornton had always been so hard to see past his "mill work" that you just never felt that his was true to his feelings wholeheartedly. Thanks so much, Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays and good luck!