This was awesome! Its sad that this couldn't be a multi-chap fic! I would love to see more of this, whether its a sequel or just the same story but with more chapters! Its nice to see an insane serial killer version of Peeta every once in a while! : D

OH DEAR LORD, WHEN I BEGIN TO READ THIS I WAS SAD FOR PEETA AND NOW I'M LIKE Oo! THE F**K PEETA HOW COULD YOU...OH DEAR I AM SPEECHLESS LIKE MY HEART IS BEATING FAST!

The fact that you made Peeta a serial killer is hilarious! I mean seriously *slow claps*

:)

Please please please please make it multiple chapter and update soon!

Holy shit I was so blown away at the end! Very very good!

Peeta though ajkhbsdfksbjhfbd

So good!

... Oh my god.

Please please please keep writing!

Great first line! Very nearly supported the entire thing, with a couple of exceptions. Very well-written.

We'll PM you to let you know when the masterlist and results are on the forum.

RAB

The Prompts

... I didn't see that coming at all. I think I'm a little in shock right now. um... wow. This was a really good story. It was cool seeing a different side of Peeta... but I was not expecting that... I have this whole dexter feeling coming over me. I liked the story a lot!

Oh...My...

Is Peeta the grandson of Dexter Morgan ? That would explain a lot ! Good AU story.

"'If it were legal, I would kill you,' I spit without abandon."

It's a good first line. Supported much of the fic, although the way you portrayed Peeta here made me uncomfortable. Really didn't know that Peeta had it in him. He'll not do anything that would especially hurt Katniss in whatever way. The Peeta we all know's not some kind of deadly serial killer. But all the same. A.U. do make exceptions of some sort.

Grammar's alright too. You're extremely lucky you made it through the deadline.

Thank you very much for the submission, Sammy'sPeetaBread! Hope you'll be writing more soon!

Cassie's Neighbor

The Prompts Staff Member

Whoa, a lot of anonymous reviews... *is slightly suspicious*

Anyway, this is a good fic, but I really doubt Peeta would kill. You did say that he bakes, like flowers, and listen to girls talking to each other, right? Then, judging from what you said, there is no way he would do that to Gale. No. Way.

Sequel please! I felt like this story ended too quickly! SEQUEL PLEASE!

Shit man. That was intense. I was all like 'lol gales jealous about peeta.' in the beginning. then at the end I was thinking 'sweet baby jesus Peeta is a crazy mofo!"

At the end I have to admit I felt a little queasy... but a good type of queasy, you know? Like this story was a breath of fresh air. Like, finially! Peeta kicks some ass! But his serial killerness is fueled by his need to do good so it kinda keeps him still in character. Idk how to say it though... Ah! I loved how you had peeta rephraise what gale told him. Peeta is sick man, sick. Sequel plox?