I'm liking what you're doing and how you're taking your time developing the story. I see a lot of great potential here and am enjoying reading, hopefully get to read more in the near future.

I feel like you're getting to the point where Veronica either needs to fish or cut bait w/ Logan. Either she can trust him or she can't, but in their two big conversations she hasn't said anything. It'd be great to see an epiphany moment from her where she engages in the conversation. Also curious to see what's going on w/ Cassidy and Madison b/c it sounds like Cassidy had wanted to prevent Logan from knowing something happened at Shelly's party, but now he knows 1) Veronica was hurt, 2) it happened at Shelly's party and 3) Sean was somehow involved. Not sure how breaking up L&V now is going to stop Logan from figuring stuff out? But, then, Madison was never the brightest star on the Christmas tree.

please continue the story

i hope ull continue

I sure hope you will update this very soon. I see it has been a little bit since you updated, life and stuff gets in the way. But, I sure hope that you can find the time to update and finish this story. It really is a very good story and an ending would so much appreciated. Please update soon !

Really get story line. Though I miss Wallace and wish there was more weevil

I like ho working together and how L is trying to convince D to tell V and try to be a brother to her

Hope tht in ur story tht they r siblings and tht D wasn't one of the ones to hve sex w her, but either way interested in where tht goes

Want to know Wht Cassidy has planned, but hope it back fires and actually bring L & V closer and stronger

And can't wait for more payback

Hope u update soon, please with a cherry on top

keep updating this soon please? good plot line, and i like the whole duncan and logan working together. plus i want to know how cassidy is going to try to break them up[:

Give me more! I really like it.

Normally I wait until the end to review a story. However I really like your stories. I found this one through your other stories. I like your writing. I am sad to see that this hasn't been updated since summer. I hope you are still writing this story because if I read this and never have a conclusion I think I will have to stop reading any of your stories that aren't complete. I am greatful to you and all the authors on here that share their works with everyone but it is so frustrating to really get into a story and than find out it was dropped. If you're just taking your time or are busy than I apologize for my rant.

I really like your story, please give it an ending!

It's nice to see a story really focusing on Logan understanding just how deeply what he did affected Veronica. I think a lot of the deeper issues in their relationship weren't given enough attention in the show :) Fanfic is great for that!

I love this fic and all your fics! Was wondering if you were going to update this anytime soon. It's one of my favorites and would love to see what else you have planned!

Just found this story and love it. Cannot wait until the next update. In suspense about what Mad and Cass have planned but I am hoping that Logan and Veronicas relationship is 2 strong for them 2 come between them.

Love this story and I can't wait for more!

All caught up! I'm loving it. I thought Logan's apology at the beach was very moving.
Ugh Cassidy and Madison, that can't mean anything good. I hope it doesn't work, I like the progress L & V are making. I like how Logan is thinking about others and their situations. He finally sees his relationship with Lilly without the rose colored glasses.
Looking forward to the next chapter!

Uh oh what does cassidy have planned and I hope that it doesn't actually hurt logan and veronica I hope their relationship is to strong for that.