No offense but before posting fanfic be sure to proof read or fet someone to proofread for u.

This story is excellent :D
Please make more :3

Awesome :D

YAY! I was so excited when I saw that you updated. Is the bit with Matthew/Cornelius about Patronus before he became a flopjaw? I can't wait for the next update :)

aw. like beauty and the ugly beast!

There's just a little problem I have with this. The Brutes and Grunts have no thoughts. They have to way of communicating or anything. Alexander wiped their humanity and sanity left. He telepathically speaks to them and orders them around.

If this weren't true, I think I'd like this story better, but it's still a pretty okay story.

why so few reviews? :0 This is cool :D It makes me giggle when I imagine a retarted looking monster doing all that stuff.. XD but yes, I like this and it's very sweet. And I all the time I'm sure someone will come. I want her to be saved ): and have some good food :D

I love it! Its scary, but I want to read more,rarly find a story like this!

Whey! Too many harry potter references. *kills self*

But mr face is too adorable ;_; I want one. Like, a lot. GIMME. *grabby hands* good chap broseph ;D

It's latin for protector?

Dammit, Harry Potter fangirlism kicked in there x3

Nawwh, we like Mr face saving the day :D

Loving 'Flop Jaw' and 'Faceless'. Faceless made me think of toothless from How to Train Your Dragon x3

That's some creepy arse story though. I don't even know why I read this stuff. My head... Still, least its not Alexander x3 good story anyway :D