VERY NICE. :)

beautiful, wounderful, i really love this. beautiful.
agree with MarigoldG Merry and Pippin are my favorites and I love beautiful storys about them just like this one.

Beautiful, darling! *sniff* Poor Pippin, glad he has Merry. They're so nice together:)

This was a truly lovely story...beautiful descriptions and dialogue, and I
liked the way you began with Merry's pov, changed to Pippin's, then went
to both of them sharing thoughts together...I hope you'll do more - Merry
and Pippin are my favorites and I am so happy when I find gems like this
story, so well written, and in character! Thank you for sharing it with us... :)