loved it.

Lol! Hilarious.

L, you wouldn't want to eat that cake, trust me.

Aw, now I want to play Portal. I really liked how you combined the game's concept of winning cake and L's obsession with confections in this story.

FIRETRUCKING AWESOME! _

Haha, that was pretty funny, nicely done.

Oh my god I can't breathe

this is beautiful

Lol, great job. My boyfriend enjoys that game and death note, I shall send this to him

ROFLMFAO THAT IS HILARIOUS XDDDD ah L would so be pissed if the cake was a lie xD Portal is such a great game

Wow, that was highly amusing. I had a huge grin plastered on my face throughout the whole story, especially when L freaked out because the cake was a lie.

Seriously, this combination of some of my favorite things, Death Note and Portal, was amazing. I found it very in character for L, and especially enjoyed the part where he was getting revenge against GLaDOS. Lets hope Light doesn't let him find out about Portal 2.

Great story, again.

mwahahaha! I saw this story and thought "This has got to be epic."

Portal is one of my favourite games .

I was very amused as L's reaction though I'm sure he could always be more hysterical (ever seen L cry?)

Loved it!

Kaida

That was hilarious! Oh, the jokes that can be made from L's obsession with sweets...

Ha! I love Portal! I STILL NEED TO FINISH PORTAL 2! MY BRO IS HOGGING HIS COMPUTER!

I made a Companion Cube in woodwork! :D

Great story, I love GLaDOS, she's epic. I can so see L doing that. Mayybe not going so far into hysterics, but who freaking knows? It's L!

Frogata 3

Haha, I can totally imagine L doing this! I love your writing style. Great job overall!:D