Gah! That was such a great chapter! I love the way Kaname and Zero are coming together and finally admitting what they feel for each other! Ah so good so good I just want to hug them! Thank you for such a great story!

Okay, I've just started reading this last night and I'm 100% addicted. The only annoyance I find, is that Ichijo's eyes are actually green, and there are a couple of instances pointing to them being blue. Aido's are blue, but Ichijo's are green. _

Sudfmgruiscufe ohmygod. Is it weird that I cried near the end? x.x I really liked that.. I never thought i'd enjoy a fic where zero dominates Kaname so beautifully.. I don't favour the zero seme thing, but i thought it was quite interesting to see it in a story quite like this. I'd love to see Kaname dominate Zero in the future though.

It was well worth the wait. I hope everything in rl goes okay and that you update soon :)
Until next time!

I think Kaname should take Zero in this story too. Can't wait to read more.

yay they finally mated! love it. super long wait for an update but worth the wait.

Your version of Kaname and Zero is the most believable version of the real characters to me. It brings me great pleasure to read something with depth and breadth that feels like a natural extension of the real saga.
This story is awesome, you hear? awesome! Not many stories do VK justice, especially when they focus on Kaname and Zero, and you my friend are a great writer, you make the reader feel many emotions. I find it an extremely precious quality in a story to make you feel what is happening.
There is a lot of range too, there’s planning stages and moments of lull, and action and moments of passion. A great symphony and you are a great conductor.
The dark scenes are hard to take and make you feel bad (as they should), the dangerous scenes provide suspense and tension, some sad scenes even made me cry! Admittedly I think the fight scenes need some work, they don’t quite put me in the moment as much (but I still like them). The romantic and angsty scenes make your heart skip, and the hot scenes make you squirm (and made me bite my lip ).
Really appreciate that you include many of the other characters and they have emotions and thoughts as well, and that the pairings vary (especially that they are not just guy/guy, that’s so monotonous)
Arigatou gozaimasu for continuing this story, after reading this I consider you a true writer and I’m really looking forward to seeing what happens next.
You rock!

Thank you very much for updating! I have been waiting for very long. Buuut, I was hoping Kaname will be the top the first time. *pout* Any way, I really hope you can include some KXZ. I really like the fics were both of them sometimes take turns to be the seme and uke. CUz personally I think they are both really strong individuals with strong will and there opposite traits really makes them compatible. Such as the hair and skin coluring, Kaname's elegence and Zero's rebellious appearence. Any way,Please update real soon!

Oh, and THANK YOU for writing Zero as the top. The poor guy needs to be on top of more things in his life. Er, pun sort of intended. xD
I'm kind of surprised that some other people thought that Kaname would top. I thought you wrote enough hints that it wouldn't be like that. At least not most of the time... Though I do hope you keep this current arrangement since you paint such a lovely picure with it. :D
Thanks again for this great chapter and amazing *ahem* arrangement. 3

-MostLikelyNot

YESYESYESYESYES! Finally! Oh my gosh, thank you so much for this!
Yay! Zero finally has something going his way with a gorgeous pureblood in his pocket now. xD
Keep up the great work, and thank you again for this chapter. :D

...and just for the record, I totally lova kaname as the submissive one. XD

wow (feeling totally rewarded for my patience in waiting this chapter). I really wanted to give a more complete review but I'm spcheeless at the moment. I'd like to see Zero discovering kaname's fear of hunter weapons

FINALLY! FINALLY! FINALLLYYYYYYYYYYYYY! I WANT MORE!

Finally! Rido knows that's not a good thing.

Yes! Finally! I absolutely loved this chapter and cannot wait for more! _

Hurra! :D Ich habe sehnsüchtig darauf gewartet das du ein neues Kapitel hochlädst und so wurde mir mein Feiertagsmorgen extrem versüßt! So lob ich mir das. XDDD
Aber ich sag dir, Rido macht mir echt sorgen und die Hunter auch. Kennst du das, wenn man einen Horrorfilm schaut und sich hinter einem Kissen versteckt weil es so spannend ist, daß man gar nicht mehr hinsehen kann? So ähnlich geht es mir, wenn ich daran denke, was da auf Zero alles in Zukunft zukommen wird. Wenn du also anfängst ans eingemachte zu gehen, sag mir vorher bescheid, ich werd ein Kissen zum lesen mitnehmen! *Lach*
Aber zurück zum letzten Kapitel, der Lemon war einfach Herzerwärmend. Wobei ich Zero durchaus verstehe mit den Handschellen, ich bin der Meinung er hatte recht, es ist immer klug ein Purblood nicht zu unterschätzen. XD Vorallem wenn das besagte Purblood schon schwer mit sich kämpfen muss um nicht " he would find himself sheethed in the hunter's body, no matter the cost to their newly formed fragile trust." denkt. XP Ach und typisch Zero, macht es so sanft und rücksichtsvoll zu seinem mate und hat danach das schlechteste Bild von sich selber. Gut das Kaname da gleich gegengearbeitet hat, wer weiß was da wieder für selbsthass rausgekommen wäre. Nur eins hat mir an diesen Kapitel nicht gefallen, es hat in Fakt ein ende! Ich könnte diese Geschichte ewig weiterlesen, sie ist einfach zu schön und zu spannend um aufhören zu müssen. Vorallem wenn heiß mit den beiden weitergeht. . Bitte, bitte bring bald ein neues Kapitel dieser schönen Geschichte.

Aber eins muss ich jetzt doch fragen, ich verfolge diese Geschichte seit dem allerersten Kapitel und war mir sicher es war ZeroXKaname. Was ist passiert das das jetzt auf einmal anders ist und auf einmal KanameXZero dasteht? Nicht das es mich stört, weil wie schon erwähnt ich glaub beide können oben und unten sein, nur hat mich das nun schon etwas verwundert. Was hat dich deine Meinung ändern lassen und warum?

glg enni