Cute and silly, though undoubtedly crack. I suspect it's the sort of low-down humor that is probably present in Shakespeare's comedies, but which flies completely over my head. Good old Tybalt just can't catch a break, can he? :)

Frigging hilarious. Fridays should be banned! I also enjoyed the Inception references.

What a lovely ending! Joking, but I loved it. Very happy and very unexpected. I understand why they wouldn't live and I knew Romeo would still kill Tybalt, but I never thought of them getting run over by the train from Mercutio's dream. I really liked it!

Oh... my... -takes deep, choking breaths- this was... too funny! I didn't exactly get the end since I haven't seen Inception (and I fear that If I were to watch it it may now be spoilt for me... oh well!) but I still found it hilariously sad. Brilliant job! :D

Poor Tybalt! Sucks to be him. Oh well, he'll probably haunt them in the next life.

I decided to come back and reread it because I love this story. Then I found this line and it finally dawned on me what he meant.

"When one wears tights it is not hard to tell when one is happy."

I burst out laughing. This story is still funny.

This was very entertaining! Well done!

"I make them so much I cannot even tell anymore" XDD You have so many great lines in here. Ahhh, and the running Friday joke . . . gotta love Benvolio. As for all the Shakespearean insults . . . did you use an online generator? Lol. Great job, anyhow.

DEAR GOD YES ahahaha! This is great. I love how it's mock-Shakespearean and then just gives up and gives way to normal English. And the reworked incorporation of actual lines from the show is very enjoyable.

Lolz. This was hilarious! I'm so glad I read this XD

Loved the Lady Gaga speach, and the girly Romeo-ness.

Loved it all, actually.

Thank you for writing!

-MewMew

I laughed so much all the way through it! It was great! :D

:O I thought they would live. But it brought a smile to my face so I don't mind. This was a great parody. Thanks for the halirous read. Keep writing.

Oh my. That was funny as hell. I enjoy it greatly! I was delightfully funny and fit into the speech patterns perfectly. Ah...Hot Topic and Lady Gaga. Perfect. Thanks for a great read! Keep writing.

oh my god, perfect!

Laughed my arse off. Seriously, the Lady Gaga and the Friday bits pretty much killed me. :D