You know the guy who plays Professor X in X-Men? And Captain Piccard in Star Trek: Next Generation? Same guy voices Bambi's father.

Ooooh! I thought this wasn't going to be any good, but THEN... I clicked on it. :D This is awesome, I love it. The way you described everything, such as Bambi's feelings for Faline, was just awesome. I love the way you seem to write! I'mma check out your other stories! Mwahahaha! X3 Thank you for sharing this wonderous masterpiece with us!

Soul X Maka Forever

Best I have read in a long, long time and I hope you update this because I have been looking every week at this story ever since it was made to now at 10-15-12 to see if updated but to my dissapointment I have not seen it with two chapters yet. I will keep on looking and will be extremely happy when this has two chapters. Thank you for reading this far on such a long review:). 2K401 out.

hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahaha :)

Good job.

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hola!

i learned to spell ur user name :3 me proud of meh self

teehee this story made me giggle (i read it not one but twice!)

MY BEHIND FOR CRYING OUT LOUD! thats mad funny!

This is good, although you might want to check it over first. Some of the sentences didn't really flow but if you could fix those up, then I'm sure that this story is not a waste of your time! :)

If you don't add anymore chapters, i think it was a waste of time, i really like it though so far

none of ur storys are a waste of time 3

i think thier cute

this one was no exception

realy adorable! X3

GOOD JOB! (_)b

You have the makings of a nice story here but I'd suggest reading this to yourself first to make sure it has a nice flow to it, because the punctuation and organization made it very difficult to read. And it's spelled "Porcupine".