*squeal* I love it! AsumaXShika is such a cute couple!
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Brilliant! I am amazed at the wonderful plot and just connection with your characters! I love this story thank you so much for writing it!

story was adorable and the writing was awesome/beautiful

At the end of this story I exclaimed "awwww" this was so cute. At first I was really skeptical of this pair but you made it amazing!
Thank you!

Damn. I promised myself I would never, EVER read an AsumaXShika for as long as I live...you my friend have just ripped that apart and threw it to the many avid AsuXShika readers that have tried to convert me in only a one-shot. Congratulations, you have successfully captured me! I truly enjoyed it!

Subdue, sweet fic Thank you for the lovely read!

I love it! It's an adorable story
Shika is so cute with Asuma!

zomg so adorable!

Great Story! Lol I was all like awwwww how sweet! At the end

wow that was amazing! it was truely brilliant! the plot was beautiful and flowed nicely :3 If i had to say on thing tho is that i think (can't beleive im saying this)you use too much detail! xD u didn't leave anything to the imaginatioin, which is, in my opinion. a good thing sometimes but in some cases in your story it interupted the flow of it.

Hope this wasn't offensive!

keep up the good work! i love it!

xxx

This is such a beautifully romantic and strangely eathereal yet fascinating tale.

I love it
P.S.: I won't object to more of Asuma/Shika fic :wink wink:

wow i think they are my new fave pairing :D

I realize that u r super busy (I'm not sure if u r still in school)but i absolutely fell in love with your story "Backbreak" and would love u forever if u could update that one! The issue is i love all your stories:)

lovely my dear

ahhhh! I love it! There is not enough AsuShika in the world :D

I love Shikamaru, he doesn't get enough attention)