|Reviews for The Chameleon|
| A fan 5/7/13 . chapter 13
I got here by reading Freudian by the fabulist.. and then I looked up her tumbler. and the first thing I saw there was this note you posted saying you're giving up writing and her replying about how well you write and how your characterizations ring true... so I had to read one of your stories. and wow. steampunk. tangled. I fell in love without even reading a word. (steampunk anything is just awesome, honestly). Anyway. :O Do you really plan on giving up writing? No. Please oh please no. You're. Really. Good. Reallllly good. The flow of the story, the ideas, everything. The characterizations! (I'm pretty sure I'm spelling that wrong..) You write people. Who act believably. You say you have a structure problem but I can't see it. You're good. Please continue writing. Even if its complete shit in your opinion. Don't stop. Write anything. You write better than I have any hope of ever writing. (I suck..) but... I don't know.. its cathartic. (cliche much?) ... but its true. and yea... i get the whole fictional characters keeping you company thing (fanfiction is always open in a tab on my phone)... So please please continue. (part of this is selfishly motivated. I need to read good stuff. Exactly like this story) ... Imma be lurking reading the rest of your stories.
| Triva 4/30/13 . chapter 13
This is so epic! I love how awesome you made Rapunzel; heck, the whole story is awesome!
| Mestra 4/30/13 . chapter 18
This is the first Tangled fanfic I've ever read, and I'm totally hooked. I love the steampunk aspects, and I love the relationship between Flynn and Rapunzel. I also like the queen, now that she's been properly introduced, and I'm very intrigued by the battery. Basically, I want more, and I hope you update soon because this story is great.
| hatakevan 4/29/13 . chapter 18
You are seriously one of the best writers i have ever come across!
| Guest 4/5/13 . chapter 18
I love you. -creepy stare-
Just kidding. Haha.
You're a good author.
| Guest 3/29/13 . chapter 18
This is really, really good.
| reader713 3/25/13 . chapter 18
| my1alias 3/21/13 . chapter 18
So exciting! I can't wait for more. :)
| VlightPhase 3/16/13 . chapter 18
I like your portrayal of the queen, no one with any sense would mess with her. Flynn's realization is priceless, how it slowly falls into place. I still find it amusing that the 'rebels' are two people.
Thanks for the chapter.
| pseudanonymous 3/14/13 . chapter 18
Being a massive lurker fan of your writing, I'd be looking forward to an update on this story for some time. When in came, I was not disappointed! I love your AU 'Tangled' pieces; your characterisations of both Flynn/Eugene and Rapunzel ring true, but also actually deepen and enrich the canon material for me. I would love to be half the writer that you are. ;)
| chinadoll03 3/13/13 . chapter 18
Yaaay! The queen! She kicks ass. Hoping for a nasty face-off with Gothel. *crosses fingers* Poor old Flynn, still trying to deny that Rapunzel's gotten to him. You write the best stories, Ned.
| J. Metropolis 3/13/13 . chapter 18
Yay another update! I didn't realize Flynn was in the tower for less than a week, it feels much longer than that. I love how Flynn is instantly reminded of Rapunzel in his interactions with the Queen and I love that his willingness to sacrifice himself for Rapunzel's sake like he did in the movie is carried over to this AU. Oh, and your Queen is sassy, I like that.
| Erika 3/13/13 . chapter 18
Great chapter. It is all starting to come together!
| Tangledgirl 3/13/13 . chapter 18
This update made my day. This story just got extra suspenseful. Love that the Queen is making an appearance. Can't wait to read more! :D
| nikkibecket1997 3/13/13 . chapter 18
I LOVE badass queen.