Great storyline already a long time that I follow and I love things as have been made and ask you not to pay attention to these noobs who complain about grammatical errors when it has not even the ability to write any required errosou even imagine this beautiful plot continues to write this and its mission.

hook,line and sinker...you got me! keep writing...that's an 'order'..

This is for all chapters til now. Loving the story well thought out characters and a good plot, however there are some basic grammar errors that are very distracting: there instead of their or they’re, were instead of where etc, i would suggest a beta please keep up the great story i can’t wait for what happens next (smiles)

From Gaskapjan

everything was great until i read about an asgard call O'neill! Really? that's so ridiculous that i just stopped at that! Otherwise from what little i read the story seems good!

holy crap your back! I thought the wraith had taken you... About this chapter hmmm interesting! Poor Eli...

Great storyline, started it 13/2/13pm finished to current location 14/2/13. Now need more :).
I think the way you started the storyline is great and the show if it ever gets back on air, it should use that idea as well.
I'd thought destiny would use the Ginn and Amanda entities to help Eli as well if the story ever continued. I like how you've developed them with new bodies.
At first as I was reading I thought you were giving the Humans a bit too much but you've written its development very well and I think its working great.

So when do we get the next exciting instalment.

Signed Adelaide

Great writing and story.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

A couple of remarks:
In chapter 2, "Asgard D.J" has become "Asgard J.D"
In chapter 3 "from" has become "form"
Somewhere in the story someone says "ancestors" but it should be "ascendants" as they're talking about that they are the "ancestors" of the ones that built Destiny, feels like that should be "ascendants", don't know chapter number and my memory might be failing me but think I saw that some where.
On a couple of places in the story "our" has become "or"

Otherwise this is among the best Stargate Fan Fictions around.

Hi I am new reading fanfiction got initated by my daughters qnd wife I Was a big fan of SGU very disapointed when then cancelled the serie I am very happy that u r writing a continuation serie.
This chapter thrilled me continue writing

ohhhh well done sir! cant wait for next one. Tho i cnt help but feel a missing daniel jackson.. would figure he be part of this whole disclosure thing. since he made the stargate 101 videos? (that eli had to endure)

Eh not sute about Eli coming into a room where 2 females are naked, including a very "gifted" Vanesses who's only hiding under sheets.. and Camille standig up naked... Eli .. erm.. would have reacted? He is a horny teenager after all.. if only to go oh god! and turn around or more likely run out :P but ah well... as for that scene with Greer and Eli im impressed how you handled it.. great job! the Eli and Layla one was touching too.

Wow... that's quite something, you've handle creating a new race quite well, definetly smells of ancient but more.. very bubdist like if i can say? at any rate it was well handled.

small typo at the end the "of cause" should be "of course" i believe :)

uhg.. the sexual overtone with the suspense of an an unknown contact is... odd... too much sex overtone ... feels like some teenager drama x_x as for the last 2 sentence... all i can say is.. oh sh**

Im enjoying this.. nicely structured, similar to how TV is setup however from a written story point of view, i find myself wishing there were more details in various scenes.. it still feels a bit rushed. On tv that would be filled in some capacity with the images, but in a purely written medium its a tad how so say.. not as rich as it deserves?

typo of the week, you wrote paints for pants for greer twice :P

uh oh... things about to get real eh? small typo of the week is - sprit instead of spirit

Interesting concept and intro, Rush suggestion was acutaly not as bad as i had feared! ... small typo you wrote fee instead of free :)