I'm really enjoying this story. You're keeping the characters true to form and developing their emotions realistically. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

haha your so mean lol telling your mom her cooking sucks lol well anyways this chapter is dark sort of... These nightmares that kagome is having i think you did a really good job on this

haha miroku is slick i'll give him that! Lol and poor sango... Inyusha just had to break her spirit or well the first one to break it at least lol sweet chapter

A pretty good start, though I think Miroku is a wee bit out of character. I can't imagine him being all noble and showing any restraint when he's got the opportunity to sleep with Sango. That's not how he is in the series.

But other then that the story is pretty good. You do a nice job of setting up Miroku's big adventure by revealing just enough to keep the reader hooked, but still keeping enough hidden to make it an interesting surprise. The one thing i'm nervous about is that it seems like Sango is being pushed into the background and losing control of any aspect of it. I'm hoping she'll still have a strong role to play.

i liked this! I wonder what miroku is up to?