|Reviews for If There Is No Police, There Is No Problem…|
| Pamikae 9/8/11 . chapter 1
I loved both of you McKenna Stories! This story was wonderful in having Cassidy more prominent yet Brick being the main part of the story. The show never used her character enough.
I hope you'll be doing some more stories here. I'd love to see one written about missing scenes when Brick told Jack he knew ( he felt) that Jack thought the wrong son had died. That Jack wished it had been Brick dead and Guy living and still there to help run the place. I thought the show could and should have done so much more with that and the later scenes when they ran into trouble and although after that had happened and they almost got severely injured at the least, die at the worst, Jack seemed to tell Brick he didn't think that way, it just didn't seem enough somehow. There's a good story there for the making with the right person writing it! I think that you'd do an amazing job with it!
| Vinsmouse 9/7/11 . chapter 1
Good story, funny how Jack reacts to being called to the school. Take care,