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Kitty-hiime 1/31/08 . chapter 4
I have two comments on your story so far (up to chp. 4 anyway), one a compliment and one a suggestion: First of all, I really liked the bit with Cid and Edea. Just the whole bidding thing there was REALLY funny, good job. The part that dissapointed me though was not that I could guess who would get who, but that there wasn't any fight! The entire male population is out there, and these are some of the hottest girls in school, and they go straight to the first bidder just like that? It seemed kind of anti-climatic. But oh well, I'm still enjoying the story.
RainbowKiss 10/17/07 . chapter 1
This is so funny though i found seif so ooc... but i guess, that has contributed a lot to your fic.

i have enjoyed reading this and have kept me laughing and feeling lovey-dovey till the end though at some points, i wished you make elaborations about the lover's thoughts further.

but it's great in its cute way. keep writin'!
PRODIGIOUS TECHIE 10/2/04 . chapter 8
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OMG! I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING FROM FINDING OUT THAT MR. NERDY IS ACTUALLY HEADMASTER CID! YOU SHOULDA SEEN MY FACE WHEN I WAS CRACKING UP!

but the Shakira song is a bit ... eh... I was kinda hoping that it wasn't Whenever, Wherever...or something like that but oh well. You get what you wish for _

Loved this story
PRODIGIOUS TECHIE 10/2/04 . chapter 4
YES! IT'S SO HUMOROUS THAT SEIFER PUNCHED THE TREPIE!

but so typical that everyone goes with their regular pairing. Kinda boring...
Squalls meanie 8/24/04 . chapter 8
I Love it! It was so good. It reminds me of a guy I think I like and we are just like that! Freaky...

I found in some sections like the beach you could have carried it out better. Instead of saying Quistis decided to soke up some rays then they left. You could have Seifer's inner thourghts about Quistis or something to make that scene more interesting than Quistis just soking rays. But overall I loved it MORE MORE MORE!
Emily 3/14/04 . chapter 1
I just read your fic and I thought it was very good. Really made me laugh in all the right places. Thanks
Verdanii 8/24/03 . chapter 8
Nice ending.

Enjoyed reading this fic.

later.
Verdanii 8/24/03 . chapter 7
How cute, although I don't have much with songfics/poems and such.
Verdanii 8/24/03 . chapter 6
Nice chapter.
Verdanii 8/24/03 . chapter 5
Pretty cool.

That must've been something.

Great chapter.
Verdanii 8/24/03 . chapter 4
MUHAHAHA SEIFER ROCKS.

That was awesome.
Verdanii 8/24/03 . chapter 3
W00t WHAT AN AWESOME CHAPTER.

But um 'with his look'?

You mean his looks.
Verdanii 8/24/03 . chapter 2
Selphie is so HIGHLY DISTURBING.

Anyway; why didn't you finish this chapter properly?

It was great anyhow, but you can't stop this chapter with just a 'how'.
Verdanii 8/24/03 . chapter 1
d00d great beginning.

Sorry for not reviewing earlier, I KNOW I READ THIS BEFORE.

but hey later.
Ash 8/10/03 . chapter 8
Oh My Gosh! This Was HIlarious! *laughs histarcaly* Moomba Swimming Trucks, Aww Thats Rich! And With The Nerdy Guy, I Was Laughing So0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o Hard When I Found Out It Was Cid, I Think Theres A Sequel *runs off to read it will tears in eyes from laughing so hard*
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