|Reviews for The canal walk|
| MrsSixxComaJinxxPittsPurdy'x 2/22/13 . chapter 1
WOW that was intense, freaking loved it though, although literally screamed at the screen when I thought Jake had died : xx
| breather89 11/26/11 . chapter 1
Wow. This was just O_O
| BeepTheMeep 11/26/11 . chapter 1
I loved the story, but...
It just doesn't work as something for Outnumbered.
The plots in it are never this serious.
Sorry, it could work as something else but...
Just not Outnumbered.