This was so...beautiful, amazing,... Darn it i don't have the right words, i'm speechless or in this case wordless. I really loved it so much and i'm having a hard time controlling my tears. It was so true, so canon i hope you write more about them soon. Until next time :)

Goku's peronsality here, it was beautiful. I loved his reactions. My only question is, and I've thought of it before, how would Goku come back? He didn't choose to stay away, he had to didn't he?

beatifull! pretty beautiful!

theres no other words (i could remember xD) that can describe this pretty, nice and cute one-shot!

read you later!

bye xD

aaaw it made me cry! but it's such a beautiful story! Good job (:

Oh I LOVED the end of this! I mean it was amazing overall, but the ending was just so loving and great! Great job Kiya!

Awesome! I almost cried! Overall Great story

This was a sweet story! I kept on saying crap when Goku and the rest heard her. But this was a very cute story keep it up!

This was a sweet story! I kept on saying crap when Goku and the rest heard her. But this was a very cute story keep it up!

N'aww! Poor Chichi! :(

I have to admit, that I'm not keen on this pairing, Chichi is also one of my least favourite characters to read/watch about, but I find she's amazing to write/type about considering she has so many emotions and is such a strong female character.

I can see both sides of her, in most fics she's made out to be a bitter and angry woman-which is only half-true, cos really, she's only like that cos she loves and wants to protect her family.

What she wants is what nearly every realistic woman could ever want for those they love :)

I thought this story was very sad and sweet, the ending was a nice way to finish it off, you did a great job! :)

Aww sweet.

That was particularly heart breaking, but very sweet at the end. It was nice to see ChiChi's point of view and you don't see very many of those. The way you wrote it made me get a good feel for her maternal side, and not the screeching ChiChi who seems to enjoy nagging people. Great job and I look forward to seeing more writing from you.

You really did great on this! You portrayed Chi Chi and Goku's emotions very well! _

Very cute and warm. Great one-shot!

Goku really is the luckiest s.o.b there is out there. Chichi can never stay mad at him, and if you only have a day I guess the last thing you want, is to spend it fighting.

You write very well, only one or two missing words here and there, but even that was hardly distracting.

I do wish though, that You had thought a few things out more, like the fact that Ox King would have supported his daughter as well, especially with a new baby coming, since they show us in the show that he's a ver doting and involved father.

I enjoyed how you characterized Chichi, it seems very real and true to the show, the feelings of anger towards his choices regarding their family, and yet, she still puts her children first, and doesn't bad mouth him to GOten, instead tells him all the good things that Goten will be proud to know.

Goku's shock when overhearing that she might not love him anymore is also very true to his character, shocked and wounded just like a child when they are told something bad. They immidiately want to do something to make sure that something good is said off them, and since Goku can be so childlike, I think you captured that well.

A great one shot

Hey there welcome back! This was a nice one shot story for Chi-Chi. I always did wonder how she managed between Cell and Majin Buu, now I know. However re-marry? I think not this is Chi-Chi we're talking about, she was always proud to be with Goku her first boyfriend and husband.

I think you captured Chi-Chi quite nicely and the situations she was in here, great work! Keep it up won't you?