It really was sad - but very beautiful, I wish there were more stories like yours. I enjoyed it. And I'm glad to see I wasn't the only one to misinterpret his reaction in that scene, with the DNA results.

great story... :) one thing though. you wrote: "His hearts tightened"... unless Dave is suddenly a time lord I don't see this working. ;)

This is so beautiful ... so heartbreaking.

I do love how the kids still call him daddy though :,).

Keep going, you have a talent .x