Gon Is just SO Sweet! ! ! !

Naah~ It would be great if you left _all_ of the japanese words in! The type of japanese they speak shows the character. At least to the people who know the language.. *points at herself* =D

Usually, like my friends, they just leave it all in comfortably and put a glossary at the bottom. ^^ Some dont' even put a glossary and leave others staring... hahaha

BUt yer a nice person, hope you make another little ficcy!~

aww ^_^ you got gon and killua's characterization perfectly! so cute and sweet, i loved it! ^_^

It was kindda weird. But really cool.

WAH! KAWAII~! ^^ write more, k?

This is so sweet! ^_^
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Cute, cute story! It's so hard to find Killua/Gon fic online, even though their yaoiness had to be the most visible one, with all the holding hands, and the "I am happy when I am with you" and stuff. I guess people are turned off by their ages.

I especially like the line.

Story of my life. Waiting patiently for him to notice me...

It just kind of ring true, not that I would say Gon ignore his friend or anything. But in the manga and the anime I always get the feeling that Killua is the one who would probablly devote much more and sacrifice much more for this relationship. I mean the kid pretty much ADORES Gon. and Vice Versa of course, but let's face it, Gon is pretty thick.

So write, write and write more!

Aw, this is such a cute fic! ^_^ Please write more soon!

~firedraygon97

very sweet and nicely done ^_^

this was soo sweet! Thank you for wrting it though cause there is way too less good Gon/Killua fics out there. ^^ write more, you have to with that talent!lol seriously though, write more...

...Thank you. You don't know how badly I've been wanting to read a decently-written Killua/Gon fanfic; this made my day. Short, sweet, and in-character, as far as I can tell... I really enjoyed it. You're a talented author.
I'd beg for you to write more K/G stories, but that'd be rather selfish, so... ah... I'll just shut up now...

*^_^* How totally kawaii. I loved the way Gon didn't get it.

~Wusai

I should've reviewed this fanfic way before, I apologize for not doing so earlier. I'm not exactly into Gon/Killua, but this one is just too darn sweet for me to let it just pass me by ^_^ And after all, this fic just made them actually look cute, even the "love" is just one-way. Keep up the good work!

Wooow! Sugoii you Ruaki-samaaaaa!!! Gon kawaii! He's so clueless and stuff! Killua was cute too....aah, gotta love them!!! I just think their relationship is so slashy....eeerm, heh heh heh, that's just me! Wow, I'd like to read more Killua/Gon fics of yours!!

Dude. Damn straight those two are slashy. I'm glad someone's finally on the trolley here. I mean, you've got Gon's constant lack-of-clue (which, good call on your part with that)and then there are Killua's matter-of-fact BDSM tendencies (and I respect you for ignoring those, it's really the classiest way to go. I always get derailed when I start contemplating K's wardrobe choices or his definition of a "binding" auction.) And who cares about fic length? After all, thinking in terms of brief well-described scenes is probably a natural consequence of being such a strong visual artist.