And yet again, another epic plot twist. :3

I love your simplicity. You take a very bare idea and make it into a masterpiece. And your writing style complements it.

Oh I hoped the narrator would win :D I was like "Please, jump from that cliff by mistake" the last few words

This was really really good by the way :) Full of suspense to the last word :)

This is really good. I wish there was more to it but this was awesome! I liked how you didn't say the characters names.