OMG, why did you stop! This was so amazing and had some truth/realism behind it. I'm eager to see how this innocent kid becomes the Evo!Quicksilver that we know. Interesting to see if he ever goes back again.

Interesting take on Mags too, I might add.

This is a great fic! finally someone actually portrayed Magneto as a person who want's to do the right thing!

and i love how Pietro is portrayed, he's like this cute little bunny that calls Erik 'Daddy'

i love this story!

Aww... that was sad... but very good. It's nice seeing Magneto as a dad and not an insane world conqueror.

Okay... critique.. Maybe a flashback or something added, to make Pietro think a little bit, but really, it was a nice fic. :)

Hey, i love this story x

OMG! That was so awesome! Your portrayal of Erik was a welcome change- I'm SO used to seeing him as a heartless bastard who drugs his son and trains him night and day. Great job!

. .lord.
how did you manage to make me cry a grand total of four times?
your amazeing. just amazeing. write more. please?

That story was unbelievably sad. I don't know whether it was the way you acutely captured the young boy's feelings or the way you handled the feelings of a father who has lost two children, but this story was amazing. Please continue writing fanfiction, as you clearly have a knack for making me cry!
Kat Maximoff

This was so sad! It made me cry! This was beautifully written, unlike many fics on this site. I loved it. Is this the only chapter? Or will there be more? Please make more! I loved it! I especially liked how you illustrated the bond between Magneto, Pietro and Wanda. It was so cute, especially with the whole "our room" thing. I loved it! (For the third time.)
Kat, who is listening to depressing music

*hugs little Pietro* Aw...that's so cute! Poor Pietro...I'll love you!

This is a fantastic fic! It's really powerful!

Wow, i was getting all teary eyed. Poor Pietro, and for once I actually feel sorry for Wanda. This was beautifully written.

aw... so what if it was entirely OOC for mags, it was still an awesome fic... loved it.

**completely horribly and miserably fails to hold back sniffles and grabs onto Lance for emotional support** so sad...i loved how you portrayed Daddy Mags! so glad to see him treated as a person and not some rock with no feelings.

That was beautiful!

awe! this was such a great story...not only ebcause it deals with pietro (smiles) but because you treat magneto as *gasp* a real person, and a careing father...he only wants to do what is best, and is not portrayed as a villian...kudos to you '-) i was just expecting magneto to hit pietro or something like that, but i'm so glad that you did not make magneto abusive...bravo to you! this is an excelent fic!

keep up the good work '-)

snitter

ps. just wondering...can you recommend any other x-men evolution fics that focus on pietro? i'm having a hard time finding any...thanks!