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| Reviews for STORMY SEDUCTION |
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   Impressive Haruki 5/16/13 . chapter 1Cute and corny! Well described, simple, and clean. Nicely done! |
| Nahau Moondust 11/5/12 . chapter 1 Not bad i like the story. |
| Guest 8/18/12 . chapter 1 LOL! Wow now that was amazing, thanks for such a awesome one shot. , |
| Druneia Serai 2/19/12 . chapter 1 It was good, BUT some of your verb tenses were mixed up. Not much else to say. D |
| Maki Hatayama 2/4/12 . chapter 1 Read this over. That's all I'm going to say. |
| YuppersTisBeCaterina 9/27/11 . chapter 1 Fatastic _ |
| Shortsh1t 9/17/11 . chapter 1 very good I injoyed it |
| midnight blue08 9/17/11 . chapter 1 hotness! |
| InuEared Miko of Darkness 9/16/11 . chapter 1 Are they already expecting pups? :D YAY! |
| Meapness 9/14/11 . chapter 1 like ;) |
| Miyu kuran 9/13/11 . chapter 1 You know saying 18 or older is just going to make me want to read it Anyway good story loved it and yes your good at lemons |
| Grim Doll 9/12/11 . chapter 1 Are you kidding me?, that was HOT. Keep writing like that! |
| lovecrysis 9/12/11 . chapter 1 other than the few his/her errors it was perfect. Just what my perverted mind needed! |
| edthestrange 9/11/11 . chapter 1 i love this story for many reasons one being they are such a great couple and you didnt make it a violent almost rape scene you showed the love the characters had for each other. only thing that needs editing is you some time use 'her' when you meant to use his or him. great story got my blood pumping. continue the great work. |
| edthestrange 9/11/11 . chapter 1 i love this story for many reasons one being they are such a great couple and you didnt make it a violent almost rape scene you showed the love the characters had for each other. only thing that needs editing is you some time use 'her' when you meant to use his or him. great story got my blood pumping. continue the great work. |
