Nice to read something about Belthasar! I really like the second chapter. It feels really sad.

The first mention of his name in the summary is misspelt, through. Another small typo: “At this point, my hear longs merely to see her face again; to hear her voice again.” Should probably be “my heart” rather than “my hear”.

“in a point of time people here have dubbed 'B.C.' (I am not sure what that abbreviation sprouted from)” is my favourite line. The comparison between Zeal's technology and that of 2300 AD is also very interesting.