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| QueenC 2002-10-11 ch 3, | abuseVery nice. Interesting new field of writing, it's makes the reader want to read more, to try and understnad, to try and grasp what it is you're getting across. It's very well done. |
| Days Like This 2002-06-12 ch 3, | abuse"He speaks softly into her ear, a murmured litany each time she touches flame to wick. Here. Here. And here. A soft, slow dance with ritual." Oh yes, there is definetly a reason you're on my favorite authors list. Stunning. |
| Eledhwen 2002-06-11 ch 3, | abuseVery simple and moving. Lovely. |
| Imzadi 2002-06-11 ch 3, | abuseYou do a great job with mood and atmosphere, and you have good original ideas. Great story. |
| Days Like This 2002-05-19 ch 2, | abuseI would go into detail about how good this is, but you probably already know; I couldn't tell you anything you haven't already heard. But, you know... now you have one more review at least. |
| Eledhwen 2002-05-18 ch 1, | abuseMmmm, nice. I like this very much. Nice description, especially regarding feeling and touch. |
| Imzadi 2002-05-18 ch 2, | abuseThis is amazingly well written with beautiful metaphors. You are obviously very well-read and an experienced writer as well. Very, very lovely treatment of a sad topic. I salute you. |
| Days Like This 2002-04-24 ch 1, | abuseI read this just because you had written it. I don't even watch Angel anymore (though I'm not sure why) but I love the way you write. You have such powerful imagery; you can create such a feel... I am so envious of your talent. Besides your storylines (which are wonderful in themselves) you describe things so beautifully. Honestly, have you ever written any original things? They're probably fabulous. |
| Syn2 2002-04-23 ch 1, | abuseVery well written and incredibly personal. You really captured Holtz and Justine and the painful tenderness and understanding they have between them. Also, I like the comment about Wesley having failed before. Brings to mind a certain Slayer; very intuitive and realistic. Can't wait for more. |
| Imzadi 2002-04-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very interesting story, and it is very well written. I liked the detail about his wife washing her hair in rainwater. I'm looking forward to the next two parts. You are obviously very well read. |