Who would have thought that that person who is always smiling, laughing and acting somewhat stupid could be so serious and sad. Poor Ayame, whay do all the Sohma parents have to be so cruel!

How could someone ignore their own child and then regect their other child at birth!

But that does explain why Ayame neglected Yuki when they were younger.

So sad...But Ina-chan is so good at sad stories!

Ahahah cute!

Wow, incredible. This personality of his really can be shocking, and yet it explains so much of why he is who he is. Love it! After reading this fic, I'm beginning to question my own existence. ('-') hm...

i like it..especially the way it ends..good work

*cries* Oh...Ayame-san! *sob*

What do you mean you hate it? Its fine! I could never write anything this deep! Exprese your self and make more please, It was fun reading it!-

Naudia

This is so sad! But it was awesome, written very well, and captured Ayame's inner, serious thoughts as well.

Lovely story! It's definitely original, and I enjoyed your take on the situation. Bravo!

Possible the best Ayame fic I have ever read. He is a fun but a very difficult character to write. Yet, you not only got into his head but his heart. Thank you.

An unusually serious fic for Ayame, but you described his chara very well and the inner turmoil was fascinating!

Strange but understanding, he wants something to hold on and being the person he was he went for something that was hold to hold on to.

UWAAAA! Poor Aya-san! Yeah, even though some stream of conciousness stuff is crappy and has no storyline, I thought you did this particualarly well. Yay!

Nice...

Hello,

Mou, you may not like it, Ina-chan, but I do… Wah, you nearly had me crying there! (It'd be really bad if I suddenly burst into tears now because hahaue thinks I'm doing my homework and this would prove otherwise, ne? That's why I said "nearly".)

It's really weird, Ina-chan, because it seems like you haven't received any of my e-mails. One of them was saying that I can't go to Anime North for sure… It the month of May doesn't kill me, June will… o_O

*waves* Ja mata ne!

*Sakura

The Animé Archives Team

Ina-chan - I don't care whether you like it or not - I think it's an awesome story! I have so much trouble getting inside Ayame's head, and you did it effortlessly. I'm jealous. Thank you for sharing it!