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| Barranca 2008-08-18 ch 36, | abuseI enjoyed reading this story, not once did I feel bored even though we all know how it goes. Great secondary plotline and characters. And nasty cliffhangery ending :P Thanks for posting! |
| DarkNightChilde 2008-08-18 ch 37, | abuseFor longer than you'd imagine I've been looking for a good cross over between Stargate and LotR. Thank you very, very, very (was that enough?) very, very, very much for writing one. I've been sitting here reading for nearly 4 hours (yes I read slow) and I gotta say, you perked up my rather crappy day. Now might I request: SEQUEL! ^_^ Did I mention you are so author alerted/favorited? |
| ArianneG 2008-05-13 ch 19, anon. | abuseAh, this may be a WEE bit late--but Eomer is Theoden's nephew, not cousin. |
| Gertrud-Eveline 2008-05-01 ch 36, | abuseWow, this story is wonderful! Will there be a sequel? I love your style. greez Gertrud |
| Dream's Abyss 2008-04-16 ch 36, | abuseWow. |
| Shadow Traveler 2007-12-13 ch 37, | abuseExcellent story!! It took me a while but I managed to read it all!! It has been a really interesting read, keep up the good work! |
| Kawaii Nekomimi 2007-11-02 ch 22, | abuseHas been +faved, its so good. |
| Ponderoid 2007-10-06 ch 6, | abuseHi, I just started reading this, and I'm impressed you've kept working on this for five years, if I'm reading the date info correctly. I'm liking it a lot, but you really need some sort of separator lines between your scenes, and *especially* between the story and your author's notes, and you should clearly label your notes as such. It's very jarring to be abruptly bdumped into your notes, taking away from my enjoyment of your story. I do believe this site allows you to go back and edit your previous chapters. |
| kaylee42 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! Your characterization of SG1's relationship was perfect. Some parts I really enjoyed were The bickering/betting between jack and daniel, sam peeking while they were bathing was hilarous and daniel's interaction with Gandalf. This is the first time I have read a LOTR fic and I enjoyed it so much! I am now looking forward to reading the trilogy and watching the movies. The characters are all so interesting and I would like to learn more about them. I hope you decide to continue with this AU in a sequel. |
| non 2007-09-25 ch 37, anon. | abuseThanks for such an interesting and wonderful story! |
| Laughing Cat 2007-09-24 ch 36, | abuseThis was a wonderful story. I loved your descriptions and how you kept everybody in character without copying text word-for-word from the LoTR books. However, I feel that you should know that chapter 35 appears to have been overwritten by Chapter 36. =/ Best of luck with your original manuscript. |
| Methrill 2007-09-12 ch 37, anon. | abuseAt last the Story has been concluded. Thanks Writegirl for a wonderful and imaginative story... Great reading... |
| AWMPerry 2007-09-11 ch 7, | abuseThoroughly entertaining. A fair few SPaG niggles, but nothing devastating. And the Joint Chiefs remark had me laughing out loud. One thing, though... Pippin seems confused as to what "Took" means - but it's just his surname! |
| BlackRoseFire 2007-09-10 ch 36, | abuseAwesome. Please continue to write. |
| kain-boa 2007-09-06 ch 36, | abusegreat story |