kool! please go on!

you have to write more
it's good
you realy should write more!

HEY! That was an evil place to stop! Please write more soon. Tip: It would be more interesting if you added more details to it.

Chochang913

P.S.- If you like hilarious(though stupid), stories, I have one! it is under the name chochang913 if you want to check it out. You don't have to, of course, I am just a fanatic about reviews!

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Hello, still writing it! I would like that when they alreardy did it, Sirius could lecture them! and that isnt that simple, like when Harry said "we could become animagus" and then Hermione says yes, she would do it with a lot of presaudation, and Harry would not say something so fast, well, only my opition i dont say that u write horrible, its a great idea, if u want to send each other fanfics then send me, and cam be friends

Love ya,

Freda Potter

please write more its really good.

This story has no depth whatsoever. Harry got supplies. Wow. Did he encounter anything? What happened? This story needs polishing.

Hello! That's a good story. Tell what happens. i want to know what happens!

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Well, we knew he would try it. Nice job.

OOOO! I think you should definetly finish this story. I want to find out what happens to them and what type of Animagus they become.

i like! g2g im in the middles of a hurricane/TS/whatever ya wanna call it

cool. please another part up! byw, read my short story and review it! more to come!

Awesome! You MUST write more! Wait 'till George sees this...

Absolutely fantastic.

you should defenintly write more.