Wow, for such a short little thing you sure managed to pack a lot of emotion into this! I think this is a great starter for something more, well, indepth I guess. You see so few stories that show Lavender in a positive light, which is how I assume this is going to be showing her, and I think this has a great possibility to do her justice.

I really like how Fred thought it was 'sick in love' in particular. That was just so...So *Fred*. :) Very cute story.

OMG wonderful! :O 3