 Mlle de Fer 3/4/12 . chapter 1Interesting perspective! Thanks for writing and sharing!:)) |
 marybeth 9/11/11 . chapter 1 Beautifully written:) lily):3 |
 birchfire 9/11/11 . chapter 1 as always, I adore your writing cails:) I was hoping you'd written a piece for criminal minds but this was a beautiful read. lovely writing :) |
 Azaleea 9/11/11 . chapter 1 So beautifully written! It was just the right amount of everything to make a good story. 3 |
 icansoar 9/10/11 . chapter 1Very well-written! Ah, Lily ): |
 duj 9/10/11 . chapter 1So she chose the Slytherin way at her Sorting?
Very well-written. You could almost make me feel sympathy for her. (But she's only pretending to care for him by fifth year, when she can't even be bothered to ask how he feels after a near-death experience, and I don't like false people.) |