This deserves more reviews! It's beautifully written and conveys emotion so well.

I liked the fact that your Norway is not cold nor mean, and that you take the time to explain his thought processes. I often stumble on fics which portray Norway in a one-dimensional way, in which he behaves in a certain way but it is not explained why. Norway's hopes, fears and the way he interacts with other people (or in this case, nations) was executed so brilliantly, the character himself felt tangible. Seeing this attention to characterisation makes me happy!

Please update if you can! It's a great piece of fiction :)

Update! ;D

I liked this chapter, and how Norway met Astrid. I just hope that the breakdown doesn't make it worse that it already is. Also, Denmark on caffeine is funny XD

Looking forward to the next chapter!

watt is happinig?

I'm going to join the chorus and say that this deserves more reviews.

On the side of constructive criticism I also agree that the blocks of text could be lightened up a little to make it easier to read.

Sweden's speaking is readable, I have seen much, much worse. However, instead of leaving out letters at random you could try imagining if those words are pronouncable when the letters are removed. Even a Scandinavian must have a difficult time pronouncing "N'rway" or "Yggdr'sil".

A group of hunters out in a snowstorm and being unable to tell a human from an animal might be a bit of a stretch even with the alcohol.

Despite this, I've been overlooking it the whole time. Because I do enjoy the story very much, the blocks of text are worth it, and as I said I've seen worse editions of Sweden's accent. It's all worth it to get to read this story.

O.o Don't tell me you... killed Norway? YOU WOULDN'T DARE!

Anyway, I agree with Ejo97, this story SHOULD have over 200 reviews, it's just that good.

I also agree a bit about the "text smashed together", but that's it. I have no problem with the way Sweden talks

Keep up the good work, 'nd d'nt kill N'rway! ;)

O_O Why does this only have 5 rewievs, it should be 2000. The only downside is the way Sweden talk, but that is just me getting a bit annyoed with it. NOthing is wrong with the way you write. And sometimes there can be a lot of text smashed together.

And was Sweden going to speak Norwegian when he said Takk, because in Swedish it's Tack. BUt mabye he was ment to say Takk ' Oh, well. Good job and OMG NORWAY GOT SHOT! (I think...)

Once again, ne?

I love this story, I really do. This chapter was wonderful .

I can't wait for the next update

Great writing, I hope you update soon. .

Yep, SuNor needs more love, it's my favourite APH pairing

Keep going and update soon!

/ Miri-chan

SuNor needs more love! :D so I'm looking forward to read more! :D

Wow! I don't usually read SuNor but you write it really well!

Though as a shameless DenmarkxIceland shippper I have to ask can we get them together?

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