| Reviews for A Prince in Disguise |
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PhantomFan01 5/22/13 . chapter 21Oh no please don't kill him after all they've been through to admit they love each other D: Can't wait for the next chapter :D |
SunRise19 5/22/13 . chapter 21Ahh, you end it there! I do wonder how all of this will turn out? Great job! Loved this chapter! Amazing work! Looking forward to reading more and hoping Gaston will get what he deserves. |
brdwygrl19 5/21/13 . chapter 21Dun, dun, dun! Ooooooo I love this, and like I said before, how you add the consequences of their actions ect. You're amazing. *sigh* I wish I could write like you. |
rene10 5/21/13 . chapter 21Aw, poor Belle and Adam! Just when they got together, too. :( I can't wait for the next chapter! The confrontation's gonna be amazing, I can tell. |
Caroline Lily-ann Youla 5/21/13 . chapter 21no, adam :( you explained beautifully why he did it, but it still sucks |
SamoaPhoenix9 5/21/13 . chapter 21I see this as sort of a transitional chapter between the reunion and the final confrontation with Gaston. Adam really needs to stop worrying. He's not even sure he's still a prince, given his absence for a decade, so whether or not he can marry Belle may be a moot point. So...the servants are still objects, apparently. I was kind of hoping when Belle and Adam woke up they'd be back to normal. Cuz, ya know, they just shared this really deep and profound moment out of love and not just lust. Boy, this curse is really specific with its triggering methods. |
GodlyJewel 5/21/13 . chapter 21More, please more. This was such a good chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next. Love how Lumiere and Cogsworth practically walked in on Belle and Adam, it was hilarious. Though I do wish Adam would stop being a Doubting Thomas. After all, takes two to tango, and Belle wasn't complaining. ;) Pretty sure if Gaston hadn't come in, Belle would have been trying to put Adam's doubts to rest. Can't wait to see what happens next. My fingers are crossed for Adam. |
So-crates 5/21/13 . chapter 21 Wow, you're really spoiling us lately with these frequent updates (thanks for that)! I hope that means that your professors are being nice (I kinda feel like I should send them cookies or something). This chapter was a real emotional roller coaster. I thought you did a really nice job of describing Adam's conflicting feelings in the earlier part of the chapter. It's very realistic that he'd feel that way once he had a chance to sort of process what had happened between him and Belle. And the last part of the chapter - yikes! I felt proud of him but also really anxious for him at the same time. The note that it ended on is ominous as hell, but I'm holding out a shred of hope that what you wrote about the most corrupted men being capable of redemption could apply equally to Gaston. Ok, probably not, but at least there's still hope that the Enchantress can intervene. |
civilwarrose 5/21/13 . chapter 21Another amazing cliffhanger. I like the realistic worries Adam had about their encounter, the social mores involved. I wonder what Belle's thoughts about it would be. It is fine that you kept this chapter completely in his point of view though. I loved Cogsworth's. "Oh. Oh, my." LOL. So it looks like another face off between Adam and Gaston is coming up! Can't wait for the next chapter, and I do hope the story doesn't END soon on the other hand, I am so excited to see every alert on this. |
MuggleCreator 5/21/13 . chapter 21Oh no... |
ElizabethAnneSoph 5/20/13 . chapter 21Beautiful chapter! The explanation about black and white sides and strength and bravery! That is a true prince! He is willing to die to give Belle a chance to live! I can't wait to see what happens next! And the scene where they are discovered that was so embarrassing and funny! As always my deepest compliments on your story |
disneylove89 5/20/13 . chapter 21oh my goodness! love the intimate scene and I'm basically freaking out about these upcoming chapters! sounds like s**ts about to go down in the castle (again)! can't wait for the next chapter! |
Lady Augustin 5/20/13 . chapter 21Another great chapter, I do hope that Adam makes it out of this unscathed |
stagemanagertargaryen 5/20/13 . chapter 21Excellent |
TrudiRose 5/20/13 . chapter 21That was good, but too short! Now I need to know what happens next! I liked Adam's realistic thoughts about all the bad things that could result from having sex with Belle, and his embarrassment at being caught by Cogs and Lumi. That was cute. |