I hope you write more Because this is awesome! Wish it was more but what's done is done xD

I hope you write more

Beautiful fic-let. You managed to capture so very much in so few words. I do believe this is the hottest M scene I've read that is written in such a tasteful way. I describe it as tasteful because you used general terms and euphemism extremely effectively and didn't go into the explicit details. That takes a considerable amount of skill. The one thing I would suggest would be to limit your usage of the passive voice, i.e. "the touch of skin was being sought." Action verbs work better in these cases.

Great job!

It was good

there really should be more fics on this pairing. I love Kou x Akira. XD! great fic!

very hot! I wish it was longer though.

I hope you write more of this pairing.