The story's quite weird already and I think the ending's even weirder. Why's all of them changing genders? Soooo weird.

Awww... Darren aka Darina and Steve sounded like a hilarious but romantic and ideal couple. But they were bestfriends once!

Steve treated Gannen like Gannen's his slave. Poor elder vampaneze.

And that pink sheep with Kith... what? Too.

Darren aka Darina and Liane? Don't know what to say.

I'm getting to like this fic. The humor in it is just what I need to lighten up my days.

As a girl reading this fic, I felt as though I was in Darren's place. I felt pain! Embarassment! Horror! AAAAAARRRRRGH!

Pffft! Hahaha! Was that a Team Rocket sequence at the end? Seemed like something that would happen in Pokemon. :D

Needs moar fancy descriptions of general environment. That 90% speaking part, too long.

More defining characterization for protagonist required; overall identity not fully set.

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Darren Shan? As in based on real life Darren O'Shaughnessy? As a female? Hyuk... hyuk...

Will it turn into wet dirt or bacon strips? Lets find out.
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BWAHAHAHAHA!

You turned a flame into a chapter, that's just brilliant! Your 'guest' (aka, coward) doesn't seem to understand what a humour is XD However, I appreciate it and loved this extra chapter!

And I think they may have meant to put disgrace...as for creaked out, I have no idea.

*applauds* And bravo for the serious moral comeback at the end of the A/N, just...you're amazing.

Oh my God, when I saw that you added another chapter I was so confused but extremely happy at the same time jaslkksdkljs THANK YOU it was great and I laughed a lot at Debbie and... oh man tell me about those 'flames', I made a DxS fanart over dA and this person told me that ot was wrong because they're brothers and I just laughed so much. I explained to that person my points and stuff and she kept replying some stuff until she just stopped. It was fun, it made my night xD
Once again, thanks for adding another chapter so cool :D it was great! XD

I'm alsona bit freaked out and creaked out because Steve and Darren are brother's... This plan creeped me out and you are a discase to the Cirque du Freak series fan. Goodbye

Wtf! Dude to get good ratings and comments make the story more realistic. Debbie and Darren love each other dearly. They won't even try to kill each other k?

First off,

HA

HA.

Okay, I'm done. This story is hilarious. When you-guess-who died, I thought that the purple paint had been lead paint- and that had killed it!

And when I read, "That night we -beep-ed and we also -beep-ed and -beep-ed and did -beep-. And then we -beep- and -beep- as well as a little -beep-ing of the -beep-. Then we -beep- -beep- -beep- -beep-." I died.

-Rebarbative

That was one of the awesomest crack fics I've read XD I really really really really really hope you'll write more like this soon!, My favourite part was when Steve missed Darren's lips. I laughed so hard at that :D Keep up the amazing work! :3

Gah! O Ma Gd that was hilarious! I bet they're all thinking die Darren dieeeee! Hahaha

I did not find this a waste of time, in fact, it was a stress reliever. Aah, laughter truly is the best medicine. :D

I feel like a total jackass because I've been reading this story since like, chapter 5 and I never ever left a review D:

And I even squealed and screamed of happiness everytime you updated, so now I would like to apologize to you for being such a jerk and never really tell you how AMAZING this fic is, because it is. And I just completely love it and I love you and this is perfect. And I still feel guilty but oh well.

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HARD I LAUGHED WHEN STEVE WAS TURNED INTO A GIRL. IT WAS PRICELESS. SO MUCH WIN RIGHT THERE. JABSDJHAKFS. AND OVERALL, YOUR STEVE WAS PERFECT. I LOVED HIM SO MUCH. AND DARREN. SO SO SO SOOO GOOD. AND PEDOBEAR!CREPSLEY LIKE AN ACTUAL ORANGE BEAR-I JUST LOVE YOU A LOT OKAY? okay caps off because my throat will hurt ajndasbfksf

I just love you! This was one of the best things in the world and I'm torn between happiness because its ending was good and I was kinda expecting something like that (I'm also SO GOING to apologize for the rest of my life to you because I read The Impossible too but like ages ago AND I'M GOING TO REVIEW IT RIGHT NOW OKAY? OKAY DON'T WORRY DON'T KILL ME PLEASE) but I'm also sad because it's over and I JUST LOVE IT SO MUHUHUHCCCHHH!

So yeah I already wrote a lot. whoops. Just know that you had a ninja reader all along that loved your story A LOT and wishes you the best and that you hopefully write another Darren/Steve fic in the future, regarding of crack or not. You just rock.

SO YEAH BYEEEE