Megamind is awesome

This was a really fun story, I really liked the idea of his clone becoming evil. Can't wait to start on the sequel.

great story XDXD so many Meg's hehe one for each fan... dibs on the real one *evil grin*

Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!

(I seriously hope I spelled that right.)

More! Seriously, awesome story! I absolutely loved it! It was soooo cool! MORE! XD XD XD

Oh, I like the clone-cyborg! He's great. "I loaded my evil personality into a clone ro-bot. Man I do good work!" Hehehe... Oh, that clone is going to end up making out with Roxanne, I just know it. Or worse. I can just see Megamind walking in on them half-dressed and amorous. Maybe after everything's cleared up, They can have a 3-way with Roxanne in the middle. Would it be cheating to have sex with your lover's identical clone-cyborg? Oh my, oh my...

Is the clone going to turn out to be Vice? I'm liking the story so far.

black! Definitely. And I really like this keep it going!

Oh wow, this is where things get good! Yes! Write, my little author friend! WRITE!

Aw, so sad for Roxanne, always getting jipped, but that's the life of a superhero's woman. I think the kidnap scene was extended much better; not so quickly resolved, and I think that adds to the story. Keeps the reader more involved. And I can't go on about how much I love your dialogue! That is definitely something you are awesome at; your character interaction is really well done. The part where Megs was practicing his lines was adorable as well.

All in all, another great chapter, keep up the good work!

Awww, so romantic! One thing I want to point out: during the kissing scene, you said there were no screams, and then all of a sudden, people were screaming. I was caught off guard a little by that. That's all. :)

Keep up the great work!

I actually enjoyed the chapter, don't be so hard on yourself! Especially his little quip about realizing he'd said such a cheesy line; I guess old habits die hard 3 If I may give one bit of constructive criticism, it would be to maybe play out your action scenes a bit more. The ideas themselves have been good ones, and have started out great, but end very abruptly and feel a bit rushed sometimes.

Your character interaction though is great, and the dialogue is very well thought out. And I think the white tux was a good idea, but for a dinner date, yes, it would have been a tad flashy, even for him. Now, a wedding tux or something a lot more formal than a date, absolutely! Even a two-toned tux would fit him wonderfully!

Definitely keep up the good work, I'm really enjoying seeing where this is going! :)

This was good. Keep going. :)

LOL Minion likes soap operas!

Black tuxedo. Defiantly.

Really interesting concept, can't wait to see where it goes. Still love seeing how excited he gets over the small things, and his ideas are adorable and romantic. Hmm, as far as tux... I'd say black. I always thought white tuxes looked a little... stage-ish, but then again Megs is nothing if not a showboater!

Black or white tuxedo? Neither. A tux is too formal for almost any occasion except a wedding or the very, very fanciest snobby, rich people parties. When he was disguised as Bernard, a turtleneck and suit jacket was sufficient for the restaurant. I'd think a regular business suit or even nice shirt and slacks would be appropriate. Just something fancier than jeans and no spikes.

So far, the story's going well. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.