Nice. Very creative. Update.

Keep writing! -

::beams:: Cutesh! I love Alice remakes- of anything! And Illumi must be so cute dressed as a bunny... -

Waaai! Very good. (*cough*more gon/killua*cough*) XD

Love your story! Please write more on Gon/Killua! -

_ good!_ me like.

Did Gon just kiss Killua? O_O I'm starting to love this story already!

Great story, the use of Alice in the Wonderland brings back childhood memories. Please give up the good work _

One suggestion though,if possible, I recommend separating the different actions at different times with a line. That can help highlight the effect of shifting scenes. Sorry for being picky though 0

I know I have read this before in our ML, but hey! I do enjoy reading it! Where's chapter 4?

due to the 'cool-phase' that i am now undergoing iw ould just like to say that it's.. cool. ;;

Cool! Neon is here! Next chapter please!

Yeah, go Illumi...put him on a leash and tell him to stay away from Curapica. Btw, no you can't call me bish luvah. However, you can call me bishlov. That's really my nickname. Hope you don't mind. _

More! More!

AHAHAHAHAHA! MOTTO! MOTTO!

Hahahaha. Serves Leorio right for laughing at Illumi. *snickers* I can just imagine how cute Illumi looked with those rabbit ears. I wanna see Hisoka. I wanna see Hisoka!