Some real home truths in such a short story. Very well done. I especially like the pairing of Willow and Spike, easily my two favourite characters on the show!

Claudia

Interesting realizations. Spike and Willow were a good medium for this. Although maybe Tara with her the one being hurt, like Spike, would have clicked just as well. But you were right about how Willow feels what the group feels. I like what you did with this. Just wish it was longer.

good charicterisation.

like it, alex

Excellent character dialogue, and yes, the home truths are worth pointing up. Like your elegant writing style. Something longer now perhaps...?

Brilliant.

Check me out, I'm all succint! Well, not anymore. But still bloody brilliant and true to character.

Kendra A.