|Reviews for Becoming a Master|
| DragonXDelinquent 5/23/13 . chapter 18
Oh God my fucking heart
| Thousandcrystals 5/22/13 . chapter 18
Ah, so I am 'sexy', am I? You make me laugh Kagotori!
I am, regrettably, short on time. But this chapter was gorgeous, and the part with Daniel nearly made me cry.
Also, you have a mean sense of humor! Twice? Honestly? Well it all worked out for the best, but now I know you have a supervillian within, laughing at us all.
I wait, as always,
| HowaboutSherry 5/22/13 . chapter 18
Sabrina needs to die. I really, honestly hate her. But she's maimed and has broken bones, so I guess that's good enough.
Violet...oh geez, she's really good. How on earth could she forgive that bitch? Lol, well she has a team of psychotic Pokemon, so I guess she's used to it.
| LillianFullTime 5/22/13 . chapter 18
I liked this chapter. Very cool. And I absolutly did not cry. XD
| darkamp007 5/21/13 . chapter 18
Wooooohoooooo best chapter yet. So is avrey gonno go crazy now?
| Sahjil 5/21/13 . chapter 18
Truly amazing chapter, I almost cried. And...Halfway there? I can't wait for the other half, if that's what I think it means. This is one of the best stories I've read in a while. When the story has ended. I hope you can continue your writing. I will fallow. :3
| OseanSoldier 5/21/13 . chapter 18
I was about to come hunt you down and make you pay for doing that! Cliff hanger, then hope, then gone! WHY WOULD YOU DO SOMETHING LIKE THAT! I was about to cry.
Ranting aside, GREAT chapter! Good plot developments in both past and future. Will be interesting to see what happens next in both time periods.
| Lonely souls 5/21/13 . chapter 17
Jerk. A cliffhanger like that? I love Vie, so don't kill her!
This story has inspired me to write. Just because I've seen how you play god. Might be fun to screw with characters lives however I want. XD And messing with the devoted readers sounds fun too. update fast.
| AHHHhhh.tired 5/21/13 . chapter 17
Haha, Violets gonna die! I knew it, and I dun like her, so i'm glad. She's so whiny and soft. Riza would kick her ass, but now she won't cause Violets dead. Danny was pretty cool, before you killed HIM. Oh, and Layla is freakin awesome. Keep writing, and omg update fast! I'm dying here!
| AHHH -again 5/21/13 . chapter 16
Violet has a MOTHER? Lol, wut? XD It's cool that her mom was such a good trainer, but don't you think we deserve more than a single sentence about her,I mean come ON. : Karo is dumb, but the whole crazy psycopath thing is better than what he was before the possession thing. I like Avery, she's entertaining. Evil little monster, that one, but she's so cute! More of her, plz?
Also, don't kill Lance. Where the crap is Red? Having fun wth blue or something? He needs to show up. DX
| AHHH 5/21/13 . chapter 15
No, Riza! She's my fav, don't kill her, or maim her, or torture her any more than you already have, okay? DDDDX Why is she your punching bag? Well, she's the freaking Queen of Darkness now...which is pretty badass...but can't you cut her a break?
The Pokemon Experiment may just be the coolest plot device I've ever seen in a POkemon fanfiction, and Riza needs more screen time. I want to see more of these cool human/pokemon power things, and the Doctor Camellia thing is heating up. He's kind of hot. Have him and Riza get together, because Indigo doesn't deserveher!
Haha, I called the king of fire hot. I'm punny. XD He is though.
Also, what's up with Mayanna? I mean seriously, how did she end up so dead and ninja-like, and does tero/the doctor love her? Or is she like his sister? Ok, I've written enough, but seriously, you need more questions answered!1!
| Loldunowatimdoin 5/21/13 . chapter 1
Starting with the ending and then spending th rest of the story explaining it? Lol, kinda cliched, but it's way cool...takes some getting into, but totally worth it. Will continue, and my expectations are low. Not yur fault, its this fandom. But hey, good grammar! Omg, so rare! XD
| Guest 5/20/13 . chapter 17
Beautifully written, Mon Cherie! Layla was introduced without breaking stride, her story merging into theirs without seam, and the battle for Kanto yet continues.
You appear to have taken my advice...but it is not enough. Fly, caged bird, fly! For if you do not, monsters wait for you on the ground! The world is a dangerous place to a bird on the ground...especially if someone clips its wings.
Your second praise and warning, then. I know you, better than anyone else on this site. I know you, AC, and not simply as Kagotori! You will bring beauty, or nothing at all!
| UnfortunateRill 5/20/13 . chapter 7
I was really confused on this chapter, cause the writing level dropped a few notches. *maybe a bit more than that*, but it's because you fixed the first ones and haven't gotten to 7 yet, right? That means that the last chapter out is going to be incredibly well written, right? Basically, it only gets better from here?
Whatever. Enough storyline thus far. Will continue, ect, so long as you do. :)
| Sparxthehdgehog 5/17/13 . chapter 17
Curse you and your bloody cliffhangers! This is riveting, I gotta know what happens next! Also Sabrina deserved the broken bones in her fight against karo. She's a cold blooded murderer with a superiority complex that uses her status to cover her transgressions. You are great at charicter writing! I've never wanted someone this dead before.