Me: For a self-insertion fic... this is remarkable! XD I like it! Very much! It keeps true to the character's personality and the game's setting. *nods nods* Well written and an easy read! I really like this fic! Please continue! XD I can't wait for Rouge to arrive... she's so Hawt!
Warse: This comming from another girl?
Me: You're point?
Warse: Oh... nothing...

Hey, great story. Please update! You've got me wanting read more!

Hi! I like the fic so far please keep up the good work! But do you think you could have another appearence of Falcon? Ayame and Falcon are my favorite characters.

Great story so far. I like PowerStone but I guess hardly anyone writes about them. Keep it up!

Hehya! It was a decient choise , that Ryoma.

Jack get's beat up alot, doen't he.

I like Jack...Does that mean I'm wierd?

Cool! But, why does everyone have to go and try to kill Jack everytime i read a Power Stone fic? Except for a strange author. 'some random idiot'.

Any way, WRITE MORE!_*

AND NO MORE JACK VANDALISM!_***

You started with Ryoma Ryoam has always been my fav character in Power Stone so it's kind of cool...except he is an idiot majority of the time but that's why I like 'im Continue with this, I will be watching your progress with much interest.