this was great. i loved the story you made up about destiny and fate. they should've used this for a plot of aother anime or something.

oh I LOVED IT! Even though it was sad, and depressing and I must go read a happier story or watch M*A*S*H, but I LOVED IT!THough I would realy like more Goten/Bra, but well done, very well done!

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good good... going on favortite... have to go now... eat and watch eagles...beat gaints...farewell...finish later...good good... must go... love it... sad to leave...bye...dad yelling to come eat... bye... read asap... promise...

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Yay! I finally got to read the whole story. And out of all the fics I have read, this one is by far my favorite. And I sincerely mean that. Hope to read more of your work soon!

Not disappointing. Not disappointing at all. In fact, you're right, it fits. But I must say it was sad. Very sad. And a great piece of work.

You are a God...I loved this...I LOVED the ending..You know, you could make this into a real story and get it published you know, there is hope..I just wanted to say, as a fellow writer, I look up to you. You're an idol.

Hey! It's finally finished. Yes, you're style has changed but I believe it's just improving. I actually liked the ending. It did go with the mood of the story. And for the rest of the characters...it's a t/m, so if you go more into what happens to them...that would be a sequal...which you probably wouldn't want to write...;; So keep up the great work and update Unrequainted as soon as you can, k? -

If I wasn't listening to music I would get into to one of my moods that goes... life is pointless if you don't have a reason for living...

I like it.

Tragic.

Did you know that tragedy came from the Greek word that means "goat"? That's one of the things that I learned in A level English lit. I'm not making fun of your fic, I promise. The thought just crossed my mind.

It's just so sad, isn't it. Not to have someone to love you in that certain special way anymore.

Something else popped into my mind. I read this in a fic somewhere. It makes perfect sense here.

There would be no sorrow in death if there was no happiness in life.

sigh...

Anyway, more!

hey hun!I loved this story! (I dont care what anyone says the ending was good) Sorry if I began to slack with the reviews...but I dont think you should be one to point the finger *grins* I hope to hear from you soon! (I leave for Flag on Friday)

gosh...it's like, "wow, it's over." just like that. I mean...I was reading this fic when it was just 3 chapters old. I can't say I love the ending. I didn't really feel the need for Marron's death. You could've made it a lil more dramatic, but not corny-dramatic, in a sense that, well, Marron died for a cause. Yes...this is a big of a disappointment, but just for the record, I loved the beginning and the build-up of this fic. This isn't the first time someone's written a princess/thief fic like this, but this one was pretty well written. good job *here, hands you an ice-cream cone*

I thought this was going to be like Romeo and Juliet for a moment. My sister totally hates the "stupid donkey" for being so slow in taking the friar to the vault. What I hate the most is people not keeping their promises! gr... (That was a part of real life catching up on me.)

Anyway, I have no idea how I would react if that happened to me. (knocks on wood) How would Marron face life now?

More!

NO he cant be dead...bring him back to life, use the dragon balls...i mean Krillin is meant 2 b rich and stuff, maybe he has them stashed in his house somewhere

aww man, that's real sad. i guess a happy ending isn't an option anymore...ok, so...hurry up and update so i can still get the satisfaction of finishing it!

You updated again! Thankies! It's so sad... Keep up the great work, k? Can't wait until you update again! -

Wow..::blinks:: How depressing..I think..I don't know! Make Marron be happy, maybe have her show up to the castle, and her father confronts her saying how he knew she came back, but she says its not for him, shes simply saying goodbye to everyone and gathering her stuff..lol, thats be funny.