Really great story

Ahh, a dark yet beautiful piece and a refreshing change of pace from the usual plots.

Thank-you.

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Too bad there wasn't much detail about the Kunou Harem though. That was sounding interesting...

This was a really entertaining story. Excellent story telling, interesting plot, balanced drama and humor, and just good writing all around. nice!

O_O Wow. . . that was really really REALLY well done. I don't even LIKE Ranma. . . hee. ^^;; Nice touch with the Kuno harem. I laughed at that. Oh how I laughed. *coughs* Anyway, I thought this was fabulously done. Dark - I could feel the desperation while Nabiki was having her nice visit with Stan in Hell. I liked the splotches of black humour you had too; even though I'm a Kodachi fan (don't mock me. . .), I thought she was a funny (in a twisted kind of way) addition. Kick ** story!! -Chibikat

I've enjoyed this story on your website more than once. The plot's an old one, but it's structured well, and you fill it with sufficient incident and dark humor to keep it interesting. It does leave lingering questions afterwards, as you no doubt know. How would Nabiki atone for killing people to meet a timetable while leveling Nerima? In fact, how does one go about seriously cleaning up one's act, if fear is a prime motivator instead of some genuine desire to change?

I won't get any more metaphysical. I've probably already burnt out a few fanboy brains with just that pair of questions.

In any case, it's a good piece--and could have been much longer, for my tastes, with rather more incident. Might have been amusing for Nabiki to meet Genma, Soun, etc.