Noooooooooooo! Where's the continuation!? XD
WWWWWaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Love it! XD

Interesting story. I would say your grammar needs some work though.

Awwww! that is soo sweet. Lal is soo sweet.
Anyway, I love this story and hope you update soon.

Awww ial is so sweet! Hope ial doesn't die from having a relationship!
:(:(:( But please update soon! Keep up the hard work! :D.D

I liked the last sentence of your first chapter. It's funny how he is her bodyguard but she just left him alone. -

I wanna know more!
. it's so good

Hahaha! I loved the end! Oh but his name isn't "lal" it's " Ia-Lu," the first letter is an "i" btw. I totally thought his name was La Lu for the whole series! Then I re watched it and was like ohhhh it's an i... So yeah. You should get a Beta, that'll help with the grammar. Other than the grammar it's a fantastic idea! I'm so glad you have some Ia Lu/Erin romance for FF! This section needs more Erin stories!

I'm an absolute fan of Kemono no Souja and any fanfic of it with Erin/Ial as pairings! Absolutely cute!

I think your grammar has definately improved and please update! I love your story! .

yes, your grammar improved quite a lot, I'm also waiting for the next chapter. Please update as soon as you can, I'll be waiting!

lolz you did a little better here than before with the grammar... still a few mistakes here and there but that's okay! lolz you are good at writing for one so young! keep it up! looking forward to the next update!

when are you going to update the next chapter? I am looking forward to the next chapters! soon please!

I Love this anime, and for English not being your first language you did very well.

Moenoke