MORE.

Ok, this is REALLY good. The detail you put into this is very good, though it is still very early in the story. I Can not wait to see how you develop this further, and how loveleen's character turns out. And thats another thing: I love the name Loveleen! Where did you come up with it? I can not wait to see how Loveleen turns out and see more of her interactions with other characters. And of course, I can not wait to see Robin, so please update!