I love it! I can't wait to read more soon! I love your writing style and I love the plot. Update soon!

"I bet Lily never did this." Oh shit, Sev. That. Was. I don't have any words to describe this. Update soon!

Inner: I don't know how is that James can't decided between sev and lily. I mean it's so obvious

Neko: I know but maybe it's because he likes lily that he can't choose

Inner: I don't care I want Severus!

Neko: lets see whats gonna happen next chapter ne?

Inner: okay...

Neko: Nya can't wait for it. This chapter was sooo good

See ya n.n

I love you. I love this fanfic. Bless you. Bless this fanfic. Bless your cow. Bless James Potter for being such a boy magnet. Hell, bless your favorite strand of hair.

Hiya! It's mee! :)

This certainly wasn't what I was expecting, but I don't think it's going to be one I ship. It's too...contradictory for me, I suppose, but I still enjoyed the story.

The part where Severus wrote 'Snape Loves Prongs' made me squee outloud, it was so cute! But my only qualm-besides the grammar mistakes-was that Prongs wouldn't fall in love with his most hated enemy so quickly, I think, but maybe it was a special circumstance.

Still enjoyed it!

-Remus/Spirit-

aaah great chapter! But you have to update soon! Nooooow! I have math now, so it would be nice with another 10 chapter or so xD Awesome1! :D

Neko: eh! James is finja sleep whith lily after he kiss sev-chan?

Inner: I'm gonna kill him!

Neko: wait inner- chan 0.0'

Inner: but- but ne-chan that's- I mean sev want him and he go to that... That

Neko: it's okay im sure the writter have something in mind you know

Inner: FINE... But if he hurt sev im gonna get really piss off

neko: okay... Great strory... See ya later ne? 3

#This story is hard to read because of the way you're having people talk.

Example.

Severus says something. James responds.

It would be better if you only had Severus says something. Severus does something.

"What do I do Moony?" Remus sighed and rested his head on the beam.

Okay, that sentence right there makes it sounds like Remus is talking when in fact it's James. Could you please not have talking right next to another character's reactions, it's really confusing.

I absolutly love this story! _ There were a few grammar mistakes however. But i still love it! keep updating please.

Hey, I like this.

It's funny, fresh and snappy.

Update soon :)

ColourMePretentious

neko: nyaaa! . poor sev-chan it's so sad

inner: cmon... get over it

neko:NO... sev it's so cute if james hurt him he will be in trouble. aaannnd i know uou like sev-chan too n.n

inner: whatever /

neko: ku ku ku... anyway Ill be wating for the next chapter please go on it a great fic. ne inner-chan?

inner: H-hai neko-chan its right O/O

neko: see? well see ya later nyaaa! O.n

Consider me weaned into your story :) Please continue!