I hope u write another chapter.

...was a great story, til this chapter...new character is too all knowing and it kinda makes it hard to be interested in her or what the rest of the story has to offer...good story, all knowing characters just aren't my cup of tea

Wow, you have great story telling skills, I couldn't stop reading, great job!

Can't wait to read more, I have never been so excited to read what happens next. Plus this story has me bouncing off the walls. Also this story sounds fantastic, so PLEASE update as SOON as you can.

this is a good story, i noticed it has been over 2 years since you've updated, please put another chapter up (providing that wasnt the end)

Amazing and awesome. I read it all in one sitting, amazing!

I realy wish you would finish this! It's a great story.

Actually in some x-men like the cartoon on tv they do wear spandex. also maybe they wear spandex in the comic books. and i think they did for the 2nd movie maybe, can't remember what they did for the missions in the moives if they wear spandex or not

I love your 's vary well only problem that I have is when Rogue says I not Ah.I'm from the south and we don't say get it right next enough of that you must update soon.:)

Update! I love this story and I want MORE! ;)
-SciFiGeek

Good story

k, well, i dunno if you've got an answer to this already, but i was reading this again and i saw you asked why the proffesor was in a wheelchair. so, here's what i've gather: when the professor was a baby, he had a twin sister. the tried to kill each other in their mother's womb. his sister tried to strangle him with his own umbilical cord, but he got out of it and used his mutation to kill her. the fight trigered their premature birth, him crippled and her stillborn, aka dead. no idea why they tried to kill each other before they were even born, but that's why he's in a wheel chair. or at least, i read a comic and that's what the comic said happened. so yeah.
ja ne! corrupted-innocent
(nire rocks!)

It was going so well... good plot, good style, interesting characterization.. but then you had to write this REALLY annoying mary sue (Nire) in your fic. She's annoying as hell, way overpowered and serves no purpose. Too bad, this fic had started so well

Update, darn you! Twelve chapters is not enough. You write too well to keep us from hearing the rest of this story, and there are precious few other Logan/Marie romances to entertain so adequately. Please, update. I beg you!

Great story, i liked the whole prom thing and the way that they met Nire. I also enjoyed the fariytale land where she lived.