Yay! I knew Ames would come back and save Chance. What an action packed chapter. I can visualize all this happening. Thanks for the great story!

Another great chapter written! It is cool to see how Ilsa has envolved and become one of them. She has learned to think like them and not be such the nampy pampy that she was in the very beginning. Nice surprise with Ames popping up at the right moment.

Wonderful chapter - again... You know, I'm definitely running out of things to say here... ;-). The first part was hilarious. Ilas might be the adult, but I have my doubts about the in charge part *grin*. But she made a pretty good warden. I bet the CIA guy expected her to make a stupid mistake.

The second part makes for a very good contrast - lots of action, explosives... And a nice surprise. And I have a feeling Ames is right to doubt the timing of that apology... ;-).

Yay! The team is back together again. I love the undertone of humor in this chapter.

And Ilsa's done a good job holding the agent at bay. However, her comment about "prayer" may have just given her away.

Chance pretending he wasn't concerned about the boys was enjoyable to read. It was very entertaining!

And I love how Winston was able to call him out, lol. "Baking with Julia" and the bad milk...priceless!

And here they go, on yet another adventure against all odds...going against a military, heavily guarded research facilitiy. Wonders never cease!

I like how the season is ending being about "them" and not a client! I just seems fitting somehow!

OMG this chapter rocked. Poor Chance foiled by his reputation and Guerrero's. To snitch on Guerrero means a slow and tortureous death. Ilsa has my sympathy, sure that lots more goes on at her place of employment that she knows nothing about. Great comment about the discount with the contractor and her owing him money. Priceless. Cannot wait for Chapter 82.

Holy crap...they really messed with G's life. What a corrupt group, all in the name for the greater good...sure.

Fascinating back story. I am extremely anxious to hear what Winston has to say and what kind of affect it'll have on Guerrero.

Your vision of these two together is perfect. They just simply make me smile. I loved Winston's conversation with Leonard...so telling.

"You owe me a couple of bucks for the installations, by the way. Struck a deal with the contractor, though. Dude gave a discount."

You know, I think that's the *last* of Ilsa's worries right now. :D

That's one hell of a bombshell, dude. Unbelievable. Awesome work.

Poor Chance, foiled by his own and Guerrero's reputation... *giggle*. And that scene with the curdled milk was simply ROFLOL! I could *so* see that happening...

And the whole saving Guerrero's father's corpse and cremating it - yep, that's certainly crazy enough for one of Chance's usual plans... now we can just sit back and wait for it to go wrong ;-).

And I think I haven't mentioned in a while how much I love that your stories can flip from serious to funny or vice versa within a few sentences and still be absolutely believable.

Good Chapter! Winston and Guerrero are a great team together. This story line will be interesting to see how it unfolds. Keep up the good work!

Heavens, what a story! I can only wonder what kind of ramifications that tale will have... And that last scene between Winston and Guerrero is absolutely chilling. I really hope Winston will be able to prevent Guerrero from going on a revenge-fuelled killing spree, or I'm afraid the team will be short another member.

Great start to a new chapter. Winston and Guerrero do make a great team. Poor Chance left out of the loop. Cannot wait to see where this is going. I somehow see torture, maheim, guns, bombs, fighting etc coming up here shortly. Can't wait! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

I know it's been a long time since I commented and I apologize. I promise I've been reading every chapter you post with anticipation and excitement - I love this story to bits, I do!

So what do I have to say besides man this is a crazy ride! I love how much you're throwing at us. It's intense and it's also like the storm of shit that's been building is starting to boil out of that pot it's been stewing and swirling in.

I just can't wait to see hoiw it all goes down. But what I am really looking for is to see how the whole thing with Innokentij and Ash is gonna go and if this is going to be what breaks down the wall that was blocking Ash from the truth of what his dad was and if he'll ever learn of Juliet, his real mom, and what Philippa did.

And dude what about Ames and Chance, what the hell will happen there? Or Guerrero and Ilsa? Ack! Man I know you probably have this all planned out, but I am hoping all this gets answered soon OR that you have another season on the way cause all this is killing me!

LOVE this!