   emerald2016 5/16/12 . chapter 1Completely amazing... You really are an awesome writer! I love how descriptive you are, unlike many other fanfiction stories I've read. Please update, I love this story... It's by far the best I've ever read. :) |
| anon 4/29/12 . chapter 3 The writing is amazing. Props. |
| Ella-Mango 3/23/12 . chapter 3 When are you going to update? I hope its soon. |
| redblood1 3/14/12 . chapter 2 please please update soon! |
| ChloeXDerekDP 3/6/12 . chapter 3 I realy love this please put up more. |
| ChloeXDerekDP 3/6/12 . chapter 2 I realy do love this. I love the twist. I realy wanted this to happen. |
| ChloeXDerekDP 3/6/12 . chapter 1 I realy realy love this. |
| romancejunky 2/6/12 . chapter 3 please keep going, I love it. |
| Stjornu 1/30/12 . chapter 3 Good. I thought it was surprisingly romantic and sweet. |
| Xena 1/14/12 . chapter 3 Why did you leave me like this? |
| elizi02 1/1/12 . chapter 3 Whew.!
Please update again soon!
;) |
| Reach For Me 12/30/11 . chapter 3 Loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| army brat 12/27/11 . chapter 3 U cant just leave us like this! Its inhumane! U need to make Derek screw Chloe senseless! Like it should have been in the boks... |
| hljohn 12/26/11 . chapter 3 you gonna finish this one? |
| anon 12/23/11 . chapter 3 U CAN'T STOP NOW!DONT JUST LEAVE US LIKE THAT! |
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