What the fuck?

okay... what was the point of that!

So what was the point in this? Obviously not because writing is your life... or for the enjoyment of others... my guess would be you wanted to get flamed. You wanted to read all of the horrible reviews. Congrats. Here's another.

wow that was by far the suckiest thing i've ever read. Please dont write ever again and do everyone else a favor...U SUCK!

It would have been better if you had added ALOT more detail and seperated the story into more than one HUGE paragraph... You really should have researched more because the names aren't right, with the exception of Sara.

It wasn't Capotion, it was Capote, and the addition of chior club was a bit odd because it had nothing to do with the story line. You need to work on making your writing flow better...

Not to be rude, but paying attention in English does pay off.

Good luck with whatever else you write. While the comments may be mean, at least some of them are constructive.

What the hell was that?

Faith? Lance? Fred? it was Sheneil(spelling is wrong, but it's actually her name), Derek, and Snook(the dude's nickname)... and SINGING?

You basically took the movie and turned it into your own little bastard child that no one could ever love, so it cried in the corner for all eternity in over-sized clothing sitting in it's own excrement...

and it's specific, not pesific.

that fuckin sucked u retold the story nearly exact it had no point and well SUCKED!

oh my god that story SUCKED! like i dont' even know why you even put it on here, its such a sad pathetic excuse for a story.

i'm sorry to tell you this but yo stori ws kinda dumb.

that was really, really, really lame. why the hell is it rated R? it's like, below G...

i loved the movie, and so what the hell is this?

you put everything into one paragraph, in a crappy, rushed summary of the BASICS of the story, there is no detail, and you end it "They became boyfriend and girlfriend. THE END."

either you didn't pay attention while watching the movie, or you are to young and/or immature to be dealing with matters such as sex and things of the like. grow up, and please dont continue this.

I agree...this is lame and poor...piss poor...there's NO paragraphs...no plot and you just end it..'boyfriend and girlfriend' damn that movie was so much more...dont you dare come on here and take the piss out of this film...gr I am going...I am major ticked off

this story would have been a lot better with more sex and details

sux!

You call this a story?

It was pretty good, but why in the hell did you mess up pretty much all the names? The only one you didn't mess up was Saras's first name.