um...dont you think that it is a sign to stop writing this shit if you have to defend yourself by writing yourself a review? the only good reviews for any of your stories are either written by yourself in defense of probably by your friends. I cant even tell you to quit while your ahead...I hope you cant get much worse. you have no imagination and the writing skills of a twelve year old. finish junior high and them try again sweetie pie

ok, ur save the last dance fic was rated r when it was below g, and this piece of crap is rated pg, and u use the word fuck like, in every other sentence! either you are really screwed up, or...well, ur just realli screwed up.

xetha's handy helping hint of the day: USE THE FRICKIN ENTER KEY ONCE AND A WHILE! THEY'RE CALLED P-A-R-A-G-R-A-P-H-S! they help, you know!

sucked. crap. bull. boring. shit.

thts a compliment.

WHAT THE BLOODY HELL IS THIS CRAP!

roguemagic 13

PS: and haven't you ever heard of a little thing called the ENTER KEY?

omg that sucked, i no this is where ur supposed to b able to write and junk, but thats what it was, junk, total crap, please do not write any more of that stuff, cause really, it sucked

Shit, shit, shit, and more shit. D

interesting

wot the fuck? tht was shite! no offence...no w8 thts a lie, offence. Trylinkin it sumhow to how the movie actually goes not just...they met, they fucked. thts not how it happens. i hope u dont wanna b a writer wen ur older, coz i certainly wont b buyin ur bux 4 any other reeson thn 2 swat flies with them.

That is the worst piece of crap I have ever read.

ahahahaha more!

That was so funny i was cring!

um, man dat really suck

utter crap...even worse than some of my self insert EVA fics...give up and try again...i mean come on. Jim gets lucky on the first date! thats just not right.

Definitely not a g rated story. How could you give this a g rating considering the language you had in it?

ok im sorry...but that really wasnt good at all