Well done! Excellent!

So glad to see another fic on this pairing! There isn't enough of it!

Ah, good Dawnshipping. Makes me happy. Besides a few grammatical issues, the writing was of good quality, and you did a great job with characterization of both Karis and Matthew (along with the rest of the gang when they showed up). I can definitely picture both of them reacting in such a manner if they ever were put in such a grea - errr, awkward situation. The scene in which Matthew removed Karis's clothes was very well done. I thought you did a great job creating sexual tension curing that entire section. I ended up reading this sentence "He came out of his thoughts when a moan escaped from Karis" as "He came when a moan escaped from Karis" and had a good chuckle afterwards. The scene afterwards in which they were discovered in there awkward position also gave me a good grin. Sveta should not be trusted . . Overall, I enjoyed it a lot.